* Slow down the action, telling it bit-by-bit
* Add Dialogue
* Give details
* Show small actions
* Add internal thinking
Writers, you'll want to type your draft here. Remember, you're the author. That means that you decide on the work you need to do to make this the best story it can be. You may do any of the things on the chart of strategies for elaborating.
Formative Writing Rubric for Progress from Ms. Nowak